EVANESCENT DREAMS


Moments when I was ,
 engraved with my thinking
 Had ‘not had any inkling ,
where they were getting
mincing Closed eyes
dreaming for eternity,
 In another world was crawling,
 taking soft pillow in my hand felt
as it was heavenly cleaving
 emancipated from all fear,
 In the fragrance of paradise
 I felt as every moment was blooming
 Rosy petals full of my hand
My desire for eternity was so intense
 All cherubs protecting me
 As if I was tiny pearl between shells
 Being somnolent , I seep through my eyes
 Its not night but let me sleep a while
Cuddling into white feather’s bed
Blooming every petal
Incensing every shred
Lost into dulcet dream
Eye lids blinking and brimming
suddenly A denizen thunder gurgled in the sky
 All cherubs disappeared from the sight
All darken away one moment
ago all was bright
 All petals turn into thorns
Cherub , angel ,feathers all
 Don’t know where had gone
 Me ,my tears ,my hands Pricked by thorns
 And my evanescent dream
Just left me all alone
 ...................................................VAISHALI

Comments

Anonymous said…
hey cant say anything bout it,,u know y..bcos m juz speechless..all de words of praise ud b applicable.so m not trynig to do that..
well.mm.a tender n delicate;y wirrten from the core of the heart of a bona fide poetess..reaaly good work..keep it going..
10:19 AM
Anonymous said…
Another great poem. Use of words is improving everyday. Very good... Keep it up. Just wait for my blog now. :)
11:40 AM
Anonymous said…
The combination of illusion and reality that craves the facts of life. Your thoughts and illusion somewhere strike the real aspects of life. Your perception on filial heart and dreamful feelings are the application of your actual self-being. thats the way to express the reality of life that few people hardly feel it. Nice enunciation god bless you
12:50 AM
Anonymous said…
NICE RHYMING and GOOD WORK Keep on writing new stuffs.
10:50 AM
vaishali said…
who is this anonymous one should suppose to put his/ her name
11:04 AM
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